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Old 07-14-04, 05:06 AM   #8
Tempa
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PLEASE RETURN THA FAVOR
Me vs. SevenThird


Deadly Rhymes 01 - Not a bad verse. Tha lyrics could have been better though. You had some iight punches in there. Good structure and a few multi's. Overall ya verse was iight man..........6.5/10

Valor - Overall just lyrically you ate em up. You had less punches yet they were stronger. I was feelin em more. Last line was nice. Left me wit a grin. Good job to both of ya no hate..............7.5/10

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