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I’m Conjesting This Vortex! Bitch, Im Fukkin This Whore Next Im Known To Surpass Your Level Like Fukkin Drugs-Blessed …
He Claim Gangsta So This Thug’s Next, Riot Claim To Be Sick… After Infected Needles With “Blood-Tests …

Mad Streched!..Wasnt feeling the punch that much..vocab and flow was good 4/10

This Hoe’s Spared He Spoke Impared I Neglect Bitches[Appearance N Leave Him “Proned-N-Scared. …
I’m Dope Here! And In-TiMe Will Propel Bitch To His [Hometown] To Prove That He’s Going “No-Where. …

Was Ok..wasnt great though..punch was kinda weak 4/10

I’m Infected G! We Got Separate Dreams!! Riot States That He Legend To Rap Battles But Only When He “Wreck-The-Keys
I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch)

Tha was decent..bit played but the concept was orignial!..6/10

I Bomb Ya Fags Your Drama Lacks! Bitch Isn’t [Gifted]! N Just That Proves He Don’t Belong-In-(W)Rap. …
I’m Stronger Man!! Plus The Only Time This [Bitch] ‘Flows Wit Fury’ Is When (S)He On-The-Rag. …

Didnt flow in my view was a weak punch to...3/10

Damaged- If tha was an experiment with structure..i would advise you to change it! lol..anyway your vocab i was impressed with in most parts..flow was ok but fell off once or twice..punches were mostly weak with played punches..use a bit more imagination wit your punches..use his name against him and shit in his profile..which will give u fuel for personals

Da whole time u were rhymin, I came to a conclusion/
Your "new style" is so wack, it causes da whole world confusion/

was an ok personal..could have been worded better 5/10

Your lines are fucked up, like Oprah doin sex up da butt/
I got a question about your verse and that is.....whut?/

Wasnt feeling the set up..made me say what lol..punch was to clever either..2.10

If I were to give u a tip about spittin your shit in lines of ten/
It would be simply, read a fuckin dictionary, and make some sense/

Naaaa..he actually had better vocab than you..not a could bar..2.10

It's easy to see that your shit isnt even close to bein worthy/
In this TRIAL of styles, I'll let u pick da witnesses, judge, and jury/

I see were u was going with this..but still was a weak punch..4/10

So here's your SENTENCE, u get your whole life in PRISON/
For bein a whack lyricist, like a nerd, your "punches" are missin/

Was ok still not good..still going on about the judge jury concept..5/10

I could bring a doped up clown in this battle and say that it was me/
Wit my pen and paper, I'll kick this nigga and punch out his buck teeth/

does he have buck teeth..even if he did..still would ov been basic 3.10

So finally, end of discussion, period, I'ma make sure this dude's dead/
Riot's makin sure he's DAMAGED and he's only got negative ONE lives left

Nope..weak again..attempted wordplay but still not good enough 3.10

Riot- Flow was on key..structure was ok fell off once or twice..vocab also ok..But punches and sets where mad weak and played at times..made me cringe a couple of times which is not at all!!..as i said to damaged bit more witt and imagination with your punches would improve your verse's

v/ Damaged- for better punches this puncline clinched it for me

I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch)

Now hit me up on my battles under my sig..no hate..later