yep im a newb..................

but i can drop topical....


ima spit sumert quik now...
but i`ll battle anybody 4 a spot..
so jus set it up

not sure if this is poetry or topical...but check..


envisage my pain,as my heart breaks..my girl shakes ma world...
walks in takes my pride...after i gave diamonds and pearls...
my life stopped,emptyness fills me...as my head bobs n rocks..
i couldve done more...now she leaves me broke,torn and lost..
splitting head pain,consequences of migrain...u eva felt this pain?.
constant feelings of insane..smashes of door locks n chain..

negative thoughts..fear,dread..i cnt bear to lay my head..
everything revolves around the simple words she said...
its over,ive had enough,im gone,im out...rants n shouts
perpetual dissapointment...closed doors....linger out..
one day ma baby..one day lost n foreva..cnt get beyond
simple sounds,movements..internally,unrightly wronged

every day that passes...i hope i can cope with the strife..
but ma heart is broken...that girl was gonna be my wife..