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Old 07-14-04, 04:52 PM   #11
Ca'lam
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Sorry To Expose The Truth But Bitch You Fuckin Lost and Blew Ya Talent..
Bi? Nah..Reliable Like Mitsubishi Proven To Be This Years True Gallant..
^gallant doesent really rhyme with talent.. only if oyu say it like "Galent"which, would be another word entirely.. but i guess it was wordplay, so its aight
Swallow Cum By The Gallons..Admited You Were Gang-Banged and Proud..
Quit Sucking Dat Mic..It Ain't A Dick Like Usual You Turning Off Da Crowd..
^lol..
Cause Ya Face Is Uglier Than A Horses Ass..Fragile Like Porclian Glass..
Didn't Know If You Noticed But I Was The One Fucking You Last..Cum'd In Ya Ass..
^kinda just nasty lol.. iight bar
You Trying To Throw Punches Is Harder Than A Paralegic With No Arms..
Confined Behind Bars..Gave You Warnings But Exposed You Like Car Alarms..
^Paraplegic... aight.. used a bit tho.. but nice bar
You Ain't Orijinal..Cause S-Dizzle Is A Bitch..Transvestite aka Femanin..
Your Existence Is Irrelevant..Your A Pussy..Make Me Sick..Even The Smell Of It..
^aight bar..
Meta-Bolism..Ya Flow Heavy..You Soft Like Tampons and You Punch Light..
Fucking Wack Dyke..She Ducking On My Dick More Than She Did From N-Sight..
^lol
No Awards..They Can't Decide Whether To Nominate You For Emcee or Femcee..
Spit So Much Trash..You Leave More Debris..Than Salt In The Black Sea..
^nice meta..
No Wonder Why 3/4's Of Relaunched Don't Vote..You Got Them On Ya BlackList..
Persisted To Battle..But Ya Talent Like Ya Rep..Funny How Neither Exists..
^lol..

over all verse:i wasent really feeling the flow to much.. but the punches were there.. nice vocab.. id say a 8.3/10


lattin:
Quote:
Originally Posted by LaTiNKiTTeN
ROFL...aight,u've been had.....i made a fake aim sn,n told him i was
someone else(calicollegegurl) on rb,n this dumb ass sent me his pics,pics of his crooked dick,ROFL*throws up*and tried cyberin with me...he even gave me his home number n wanted to meet...
SAY HI TO UR MOTHER BETHANY FOR ME DUMBASS HAHAHAHAAHAHA

BTW,IF U GONNA TRY TO USE THAT FAKE CONVO AGAINST ME BY TALEN TED,YALL SHOULD KNOW HE IS KRYOGENIX N MADE THE WHOLE THING UP...HE CAPITALIZED MY AIM ID WRONG WHICH SHOWS IT WAS TYPED UP BY HIM........HA,and,he made up that i'm someone on old rb...strobe cleared it up...bet thats all u'll have,n shit ppl have said already......u're done just by me posting these pics....rofl


(i'll put links to his dick just so yall see how crooked it

is,rofl,i'll remove it after the battle's done....)

http://members.rogers.com/latinkitten/RP.jpg

HIS CROOKED DICK PICS(MUST BE 18 TO VIEW ROFL)

http://members.rogers.com/latinkitten/D2.jpg
http://members.rogers.com/latinkitten/D3.jpg
http://members.rogers.com/latinkitten/D4.jpg

i'm better,YOU even put me above you...you know who took it/
you dont have any STRAIGHT LINES...even ur DICK IS CROOKED//
^didnt bother looking at your "dick" pics.. you have fun with that...it wouldnt make since to chance losing the battle over soem gay shit like dicks.. so im just gonna treat it like its real.. if its real, this was a pretty nice opener
restrictED looks like MR. ED..cant win,this aint a horse race/
only think LONGER than his lines..is this kid's HORSE FACE//
^lmao.. nice personal....
caught u cybering..u're done..what we even battlin for/
rockin a CINCINNATI jersey...cuz like them he'll NEVER SCORE//
^lol.. that was good personal..
look at u jerkin off in ur pics... cuz nobody is feelin ya/
his location sums up his sex life...he from WEST VIRGIN-IA//
^even if pics are fake, thats still a nice bar.. good wordplay..
funny this kid's DUCKIN me...when he's only up to my pit/(arm)
shit..he said he 5'2" 120 lbs...dude's even BUILT like a CHICK//
^lol... that pretty funny
http://members.rogers.com/latinkitten/RC.jpg
half girl..half horse...all pussy..u're wack resTRICted/
n like HOMELESS WHORES...it was EASY as FUCK to TRICK him//
^lol..again some wordplay...
a drop of a genius?... ur dumbness sealed ur fate/
neither ur skinny ass OR ur verses HOLD ANY WEIGHT//
^aight personal about his appearance..
he refused to go 30 lines,demanded 16..he aint got sick shit/
guess he wanted to SAVE SOME SPITS to LUBRICATE HIS DICK WITH//
^lol..
http://members.rogers.com/latinkitten/RC2.jpg
LOOK AT HIM TRYNA CYBER^^^^^ ROFL


OVERALL: id have to say this was a pretty good verse.. she aimed the verse more at him, and had some pretty good personals.. pretty good wordplay.. flow was decent.. id give it a 8.5/10

Reflections:restricted you came with some nice vocab.. pretty nice metas.. but the flow of the verse i wasent feeling.. but you made up for that in your vocab and metas.. Latin, oyu had some good personals, and decent flow.. personals is what pulled you ahead just by a tad.. but those pics is what did it ~R~.. lol thats what pulled her ahead..

V/Lattin
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