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Old 07-14-04, 05:01 PM   #11
~Lady Fiya~
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Best Lines: opener-
Marv: u aint built 4 u bound da fold,he dont think jay sick dis kidd doubt's da flow-
till my doggs grab dis fag "tie k-swiss up" 2 a tree and just rip out his "sole"*
^lol, and the lines about the structure! Good thing u explained ya punches fa the slow ppl! lol

Best lines: fa k-Swiss was the punch: 1 4 yo body/dat got put in uh body bag an 2 4 yo flow dats been spit by many fags..<not bad fa a punch but work on ya structure plz... u don't need all those slashes and ... You just confuse ppl.

My vote/ Marv> mo' punches, wordplay, betta structure "hands down"

*Y'all could hit up my battles but ain't nobody battlin' me... lol so*
~wun~
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