Durmil:

Poetry? I don't believe in urban legends I think shit like that is wack..
Guess Its no wonder you'll always find my foot on top of ya crack...

Explanation:

well I say that the flow was there of course I was feeling that.....
but I wasn't understanding it and I don't really consider what
you typed a personal because I didn't get it once again..........
punch due to that fact wasn't hard hitting just light...and it wasn't
very original in my opinion at all...................................

Rating: 4.5/10


Apotheosis:

Fruity like apples. . .
. . .but that ain't why I hate ya,
its coz ur naturally a bitch. . .
. . .like mother nature

Explanation:

well the 1st line to me wasn't very good but chu were setting the
punch up and the 2nd was ok......................flow was very nice
it was pretty original and creative so thats cool.....................
and I can tell you didn't try at all.......................................

rating: 6.5/10

Vote goes to: Apotheosis ^FOR THOSE FACTS