|
Bangs like bikini attol
|
IP:
no real competition here.. willnova, your problems started off with your opener, it wasnt a diss.. and it was real kindergarten... your second bar was just self glorification, 3rd bar didnt finish with enough syllables, same prob with bar 4... look i could go on.. but i dont think i need 2, (weak closer aswell)
ok, you can rhyme, dont get me wrong, but u really need to elevate on your battle rhyming skills.................
one man band took this easily.. only thing i can really say to him is that he shouldnt be battling newbs like that... and ya closer was a bit weak... but other then that it was a fairly decent verse.
votes going 2 one-man-band.....
|