MARVolous1009: Good structure, the flow was right on point without a doubt. The opening line was pretty syck. I got it about the shoes and te sole of the shoes, pretty tight. Punches were hittin hard, as their was some personals in there that added...not really any good multies though, might be something to look into next time.

K-swiss: You need to work on ya structure, flow wasnt too bad, but break it down into lines and bars...just cout syllables a lil better...and your flow will be right on point. Punches were aigt...coulda been a lil harder...his came at you harder because he was using more personals. The Metas you were using werent really creative, just look on the bright side a lil more. Not too bad of a verse, Marv just came harder with it.

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