I have a lot to learn...
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IP:
goodbar took this one easy... better punches, harder hitting personals, flow was a bit stretched in some places but dw, structure wasnt bad...
forsaken, you had good flow and structure, word play was aigght... its just you didnt get personal enough.. and personals hit the hardest... you coulda won it..
v/ mr. goodbar
could you return the favour on the battles in my sig..
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