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Old 07-14-04, 11:04 PM   #9
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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wow
this bored the shyt outa me
mishap..
your lines are to short...your flow was good but u neeed to make ur lines a little bit longer..ur punches were hitting very weak....not strong at all..u used fair vocab so thats a plus.. but other than that nothing really caught my eye 6/10

retrun
or whatever
your flow plain out sucked..your lines were better than him..but ur punches hit the same..flow was worse...
you need to elevate..both of you..this battle sucked..u tied in somethings with him beat him in one catogorie.....but what didnt catch my eye in his verse..made me hide my eyes in ur verse..mishap is clearly better than you..5/10 this isnt a hate vote becuz i hate both of you..i had to choose witch was better blah.......... vote/mishap
no need to return the favor..u cant vote in my league..ur not elevated
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