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Old 07-14-04, 11:28 PM   #13
fluidmoon
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Good verses from both...
Auto:your flow was good,i was feelin that, your wordplay and the descriptive way you write shows that you have some skill, liked ur opener and closer, some funny lines in there too,the condom line and the last line, nice diss...
Presyce:ur verse was ok, i just dont think u came as hard as Auto, you should try to use more complex structure, add some multis and work on vocab, but u aint bad tho,just not as strong as auto.........bein honest no hate......whole crew a fam
VOTE:AutoMatik
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