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Old 07-14-04, 11:45 PM   #13
LiL HoPPa
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god son gotz my voice, for better wordplay, it rhymed more. But his structure wasnt bad. He also had good hard hitting punchs. But ya i tried ignoring the dashes and all that. It does kinda mess up the rhyme, but behind them God son won. But it wasnt a bad battle. Peace.

v/ god son
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