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Old 07-15-04, 12:45 AM   #487
Terumoto
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calamity:
Stop ruinin my style, it was good, but your lame-n-just-fucked-it..
ok man... you got the flow down.. now try incorporating-some-punches!..
im purgin-this-bitch, flock him with verbs, n he gets burned-when-they-hit..
try increasin ya vocab.. gay that u gotta shorten-words-so-they-fit..(garb?)

my verses are original so man, your copies-aint-fair...
AND quit usin hyphens when half ya multies-aint-there!!(retrying-is-flawed??)

flow2crazy:

yo, i know youre trying kid.. but youre verses are funny-they-not-rough..
the grown ups are talking now, would you mind shutting-the-fuck-up?


lol... you better not steal my style for good calamity cos youll never hear the end of it..haha

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