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Old 07-15-04, 04:15 AM   #493
Terumoto
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not too bad man... im feelin some of the lines-that-your-writing..
maybe cos youre still using my style......... miness-the-hyphens..
I bring no weak punches n multiples, ignore-what-this-chump-says
you just gotta take out the "weak" and im packin "multiple-punches!"..

I'ma check-this-kid, flex-with-hits, n wreck-the-bitch..
If youre verse is no.1, then i guess the best-is-flipped..

lol

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