ok, first of all.. the first 2 lines of bands verse were pretty weak.. i had a hard time trying to rhyme laugh and av, unless you were saying it like 'arv' but that wouldnt of worked.. second 2 lines were well written, except his verse did have personals so that sort of in-validated those 2..
it got better from there, the wannabe vet line was good, the non-herb rhyme was good, finisher wasnt amazing.

black plague, opener was good, second bar, waaaay too many syllables, and the pinchline wasnt amazing either. the third bar used a personal that was annoying, cuz i dont think you knew what you were talking about, the guy who said it was a beat boxer, sort of needed to know that if you were gonna use it as a personal... the next bar, top line was good, but it finished bad.. and your finisher was pretty weak..

i cant stress how important it is too have a good finisher, its the last thing the voters see, u need to leave them thinking it was dope. u both had weak finishers..

but im gonna give this vote to one-man-band.. in all honesty he won this (only just tho)

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