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Old 07-15-04, 12:55 PM   #13
Black Pantha
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From: DC (aka murda capitol) 501 boys
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Hey man I gots to give this one to...........
-Lil; Trip u gots to work on yo structure dagg
I could'nt hardly get yo shit, I had to read it 3 times
Yo vocabulary was up there I liked that
and flow was ok but not enough punches 7/10
-Boston nice verse but u could up yo vocabulary a little more
U had good structure and nice punchlines
Yo flow I was feelin also
nice rhymes 8.5/10
v/ Boston