ok here goes


mishap/i liked how u talked alot about it bein his first time but that will only get u so far/i like the opener and some of the punches i like your ideaas to attack him with and u were overall OK nuthin spectacular


dareturn/good 1st try but u need to elavate u did have nice punches but i dont think u even had structure so keep tryin man

v/mishap