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Old 07-15-04, 02:47 PM   #3
~Lady Fiya~
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Malefic- betta opener, harder punches, nice vocab, good structure, nice closing: had me laughin' a lil'>
Played' key word your success revolve's around vision blurr'd-
The only way you stand a chance is if reprecussion's reflect my words

Femcee- okay structure, punches didn't hit hard enuff, very creativite, nice closing also but the Dismissed thing is kinda played now...

Both had nice metas, wordplay...

But who came out stronger in my eyes was-
MALEFIc< my vote...

no links right now, hit me up later.. nice battle
~wun~
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