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Originally Posted by Raw Material
Way to feed off my verse, and still have fucked up structure, and then talk shit. Uppin' 4 Votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-CJ-
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Raw don't sweat the small stuff man,
Opener- Raw
Closer- Raw
Multi's- Raw, no real good ones though
Flow- Both of you need to elivate here
Personals- None to speak of
Punches- Raw takes this
Wordplay- Elivate
Creativity-Eliavate not bad Raw
Originaliy- Elivate
DEDUCTIONS
Bite'n-
Feed'n- LYon a little but don't worry bout
Overtime-
Over bar limit-
Other-
Overall- No big surprises, just one emcee beat another emcee straight up. Ly you need to work on your punches and content if your gonna shorten the verse by a couple verse make sure you have some sick ass barz.