LMAO....this was horrible...
DiM, if you really want to battle on this site, you need to shorten your lines. You could have taken about 20 - 25 words out of each bar. Your punches sucked too.
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Originally Posted by DiM
Catching my uppercuts is the only time you elevate
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Are you serious? Please don't ever come with gay lines like that ever again. The only punch that might have been good was the Dim sons you one, but I don't know what the Art Of War is, so I didn't get it. I'm guessing it's someones name from it. The rest of your verse was just filler. If you don't know what filler is, it's bars you write just to fill space......aka, your whole verse....lol.
L.I, that was the worst I have ever seen you spit, seriously. Opener was ehh and the punch on his name was too obvious. Government line was a filler. Mary Kate? C'mon now.....Closer wasn't bad but he probably doesn't get it. Your lines were almost too short in this one, but it still was much better than stretching your bars out to three full lines....lol. Next time step it up a bit.....you still took this though.
Vote - L.I.......for atleast coming with halfway decent punches