Break down:
I Already Peep'd Ya Shit And I Know You're Weak! You To Young For This! No Way You'll Ever Be Pushin Pounds You Feather Weight! And I'll Show Ya The Sky Cause When You Catchin My UpperCuts Is The Only Time You Elevate!
^Bar was nice punchline wise..but where was the flow..you had
no flow at all.. which ruined the entire bar.. less than average.. 4/10
Why You Even Bother To Step? I Got Nice Aim Bout To Pull Out My Weapons! You Judgin Me Cause At RB My Name Is New! But Trust I'm A Rap Solider Bout To Teach You The Art Of War Cause DiM Sunz Tzu! (Sons You)
^again no flow at all.. punchline was average..wordplay was coo.. lil basic rhyme scehem so far tho..6/10
Text Ya Only Accomplishment! Skilled? You're The Exact Oppisite! Ever Better Than Me That's Just Preposterous! Time To Come Out The Closet Kid! Cause I'll Split Ya Soft Clique Wit Spit From Ya Own Esophagus!
^this was good.. first time i actually saw a flow at all..good multies..nice punches.. 8/10
Big Mouth'd On Some Dumb Shit! Girls Round Him Finally Growin Some Tits And He's Screamin 'Somethin New To Me!' This Youngin Been Spendin His Child Hood Years Jackin Off To Power Puff Girls Dreamin Bout Hittin Puberty!
^nice punches..but again, no flow.......flow is a must, or else its not a verse-Period.
And I Hate-Sluts! Slappin This Bitch-Messed Up His Make Up! You Softer Than Charmin Cat! And You Still Reppin Yaself As A Bitch Who Is Just Fulla Bitch Moves! Sorry To Say I Just Shit On You! But No Need For Toliet Papper When I Got L.I. Raps!
^i thought this was horrible..no flow.. no rhymes foreal in it..just a diss sentence..wasent feeling this.. 3/10
Last thoughts: The thoughts and wordplay-punches were there..but wtf man.. no flow.. no rap devices for real.. sentences are for papers, not verses.. over verse was 5/10 due to lack of flow and structure...
L.I:
Must not have been told that to rap talent is a must...
Kids skills.. go about a high as an oxygen ballon does...
^nice punch.. good flow.. 7/10 for an opener
Career must be in glue.. way his rap fate is stuck...
Fuck lettin the light DiM.. i just pulled the plug...
^2 nice punches, and one good nameplay.. 8/10 punch.. nice
No need to tell him.. he already knows he suck at this…
He hides the truth.. more than the US govament…
^lol.. i like that meta..us goverment lol.. 7.5/10
Quit sayin UF is tight.. get your facts straight...
They skills are bout as small as mary kate...
^hmm..aight punch... 6/10
No need to argue.. either wa u losin, no fussin b...
Only reason you can battle in EFL.. is becuz of me!...
^i like that one tho lol.. 7/10
Last thoughts: Felt this was a nice drop.. 7.2/10.. had some nice punches.. flow was decent.. Structure was decent..
i felt L.I won this battle because his verse resembled actual music, and not some Diss collection.. i hate shit that doesent flow..<-- thats annoying as shit.. dont do that.. rap.. dont write sentences.. aight?
Vote: L.I - Honest, Broken Down Vote.. Holla