dc

How you a punchline master? And you got a doctor to give you punchlines
You faking to write, Waiting to bite like kids standing in lunchlines
decent opener nice play off his rapper punch not hittin to hard
This dude says rhymings his life, And his occupation is spittin
Lets be more specific, Is it what your digestive system was gettin
again personals in first line punch again not that great didnt feal it
Take a look at Triple D's crew lounge, Where Triple N done took a visit
How are they a spinnoff off your name, When they didn't know you existed
lmaoo nice bars right there bout time....nice personals an punch
Now can you tell me what the jury done, Claiming to rest a case
The only case the jury done closed was the casket to cover your face
......nothin really off this.. set up line coulda set up a way better punch
Your raps is a waste, A disgrace, To ever be place in a dreamcast lobby
Why you not on the list? Can't you see in your name that you a triple Nobody
above average punch personal is played on him though

overall-didnt really feal this verse u droped here didnt like the comas either fucked up the flow of the verse had a few good personals some useless multies not a very good verse to me maybe u just took him lightly but i didnt feal this verse to much

triple d lol


U came to relaunched cuz on original u was gettin' sonned for weeks on hand
I don't understand, was being the posterboy for wackness planned
personal in first line decent punch wasnt worded right but still came out decent
The future of your repretation on relaunched is looking pretty grim
Cuz your user title proves that your a flaming homo an into S&M
lol nice punch..... first line...nope...
These are undeniable facts, you know you can't fight-this
Now everyone knows your lyrics an asshole lack tightness
lol ..gay punchs are funny but dont hit to hard decent lines though
You jus drop forced multies that no one can figure the meaning too
Shit!!, I have seen double amputees throw harder punches than you
pretty nice bars right here liked that first an 2nd both nice to me
Your spits are pathetic, not a one of them has been impressive
I pity your verses cuz their all sadder than manic depressives
pretty nice punch there first line...nothin to say
Ya rhymes are strong at birth, fade over their lifetime, could neva maul me
All ya rhymes got genetic defects, they form verses wit cerebral palsy
did u say rhymes? cause i didnt see it coulda been some nice bars but first line messed up the whole thing i think tried to hard to rhyme wit palsy

overall-good an bad spots in the verse didnt like the commas either on yours had some nice personals punchs was hit an miss i did enjoy readin your verse more though

vote triple n

came with better material in this battle think that dc just slept on didnt bring all he could

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