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Old 07-15-04, 10:54 PM   #7
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flash - yah it was stretched...but a few punches were nice...this bar had me rollin...
Hang on, im comin back to the tables, n' rip sick spits n' fables..
I could merk Picture if i bolded, CAPITALIZED aND mAde myseLf loOk disabled..
that shit was funny...u had sum wit which is always good...flow was off alot...multis were nice...same with ya rhyme scheme...good punches for the most part...give it a 8.3/10

PP2 - u should just lose for explainin sum of that shit....flow was better...but not punchwise....u need sum personals...better meta's....multis are good if they add an effect to the punch...but urs dont...maybe 1 decent punch in there....that was this...
the fact that 12 lines we both went the max is the only time our verses match
keep elevatin...i give this a 5.2/10...

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