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Old 07-15-04, 11:01 PM   #8
Decree Wun
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How you a punchline master? And you got a doctor to give you punchlines
You faking to write, Waiting to bite like kids standing in lunchlines
kinda played line..i wasnt feelin it too much....it would of been better if you worded it better but the second line is played to hell...good try though 5/10
This dude says rhymings his life, And his occupation is spittin
Lets be more specific, Is it what your digestive system was gettin
umm NO..sorry fam this was another pretty bad line...i wasnt feelin the second line and u set it up ok..but the second line ruined ur whole set up...ok multi 5.5/10
Take a look at Triple D's crew lounge, Where Triple N done took a visit
How are they a spinnoff off your name, When they didn't know you existed
lol...this hit pretty good...nice shit now heres a good line..good set up and good punch....very nice 8/10
Now can you tell me what the jury done, Claiming to rest a case
The only case the jury done closed was the casket to cover your face
this line was aiight......nothin spictacular..ive seen better from u....the second line u shuld of worded it better then it wuld of been nicer 6/10
Your raps is a waste, A disgrace, To ever be place in a dreamcast lobby
Why you not on the list? Can't you see in your name that you a triple Nobody
ewwww waste,disgrace,place PLAYEDDDDDDDDDd...lol this line was aiight..nothin too good again.....6/10

overall: you could of did better....ive seen much better from u
31/50


U came to relaunched cuz on original u was gettin' sonned for weeks on hand
I don't understand, was being the posterboy for wackness planned
first line kinda stretched......wasnt too good.....second line was pretty decent..not that good for an opener but it'll do 6/10
The future of your repretation on relaunched is looking pretty grim
Cuz your user title proves that your a flaming homo an into S&M
good wordplay and vocab in first line..second line was pretty hot..lol at SNM...nice shit dawg....7.5/10
These are undeniable facts, you know you can't fight-this
Now everyone knows your lyrics an asshole lack tightness
first line..noooooo....lol plz dont ever spit sum'n like dat again..i wasnt feelin dat at all.......second line was pretty good the last 5 words saved u lol......nice shit fam 7/10
You jus drop forced multies that no one can figure the meaning too
Shit!!, I have seen double amputees throw harder punches than you
damn this hit hard....this right here i think was ur hardest line soo far...nice shit...lol...kilt him with the second line....... 8/10
Your spits are pathetic, not a one of them has been impressive
I pity your verses cuz their all sadder than manic depressives
first line qwas ok...rpetty good multi's....good set up and good second line it hit ok.... 7/10
Ya rhymes are strong at birth, fade over their lifetime, could neva maul me
All ya rhymes got genetic defects, they form verses wit cerebral palsy
this shit was pretty nice for a closer..i was feelin da vocab...culda worded better..and a lil stretched but it was nice 7.5/10

vote: triple N

good battle fam..nice shit on da real....
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