ROFL @ u niggas since '04
|
IP:
I aint gonna vote cuz me and Nova in the same crew but here's my 2 cents on it.
NOVA...
Ur lines as far a structer was straight. U had good personals but Ur punches were all over the place on this one. U were too seriouce and kept Ur punches kinda basic. I was feeling Ur verse but at a point U went off key wit Ur style. these things here may point our faults in this battle. Ur flow was a lil off, Im not use to see this from U but ok. Ur openner had a good start but the Butane bit didn't ryme as good as U hoped it to. Ur closer was the worst part of Ur verse. It killed the good moment. I was feeling Ur whole verse and I honestly thoaght U had this nigga tho.
Good verse, Use more complex and if U can, comical and complex Punches to uppin ur verse a lil more. dont be so seriouse wit the battle. Ur verse gets a 7 out of 10
D-Train....
Ur structure was ok too. a lil boring at times. U didn't transition too well but Ur flow was good from one line to the next, doesnt sound too good if U read it all together from bar to bar tho. U were feeding off his rymes which isn't always a good thing but U kept it cool and added some comedy to Ur punches. U stretch ur lines a bit but not enouf to get me crazy about it. Ur first line sounds like something I said befor in a battle, U couldv bitten it or made it up, I dont know. but try to be more creative wit how u say shit tho. Use better vocab and wordplay. all in all, Id give Ur verse an 8 out of 10 just cuz of the comical lines. thats all that kept U up on this one.
Punches....D
Structure.....D
Flow.....D
Multis....W
Open.....W
closer......D
V/ would honestly go for D-Tain on this one.
Yo will, U shouldve wrecked this kid but he came good on this one. sorry.
__________________
figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..
|