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Old 07-15-04, 11:48 PM   #6
*The~Star*
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The beat is nice.Computer voice,bad thing

Both of you need to work on flow and delivery.The flow was terrible for this song.I hoped y'all have improved since that song because the flow was bad.The lyrics were iight,but I couldn't really focus on them because of the bad delivery.
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