The singing part should have been left out because the dude can't sing and you can't understand what he is saying.Your voice should have been louder then the beat because the beat is over ya voice.The lyrics were good.Your flow & delivery was good.Overall a pretty good audio,except that damn course.That shit is horrible.Also I didn't really like that ending.But other than that I give it a 8/10.

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