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Old 07-16-04, 12:18 AM   #7
$MOKESKREEN
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I just seen lights flast before my eyes it was a unforgettable time
Cuz I almost died from laughin' too hard after I read your first line
I'mma give u some tips since this ya first, and I'm keepin it real
Invest in a nice rag, some turtle wax and go polish ya skills
Stay in class don't drop out Biggie please u need to stay in school
Take a look at the rules 10 - 15 lines for your verse you illiterate fool
We just started and I passed ya I’m bout to set the nitro- off
Biggie you wouldn’t “XL” if u was the programmer of Micro~soft (get it)
How does it feel to live a life and know u a coward
But can’t do nothin’ bout it cuz your dumb ass allow-it
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