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Old 07-16-04, 02:09 AM   #8
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genicide got 1 thing on me my record and that shits ben gay/
i dont know why the fuck i got challenged by kutakentai/
->>i could take it or leave it 5/10

u allow yourself to be tricked so easily/
first u giv me a winnin vote now another ko are u teasin me?/
->>doesnt make sense or flow at all...wouldve been alright with a better 1st line 2/10

u chose geniside not even knowin the definition/
its ok be enlightened heres a quik description/
->>filler...it wouldve gotten higher score if the next line made sense with it 3/10

it means the leader of the talkers thats about to be deleted/
testin mes a mishap the only way ull get 1 vote is if u cheated/
->>weak 2/10

lets let it be known before u even spit/
mishap controls the battle genicide just rides the dick
->>best part I liked this closer 6/10

mishap 18/50


haha i think its funny ur a herb we can tell by the name mishap
and u most be stupid calling me out.. ur wack just look at this crap..
->>decent punch im not into linking but it wouldnt have made sense without it 6/10

you dont know how to rap u cant even rhyme ur lines yet.. ur basic
and u wont ever touch me.. ur rhymes are weak ur 0-5 just face it
->>choppy flow good punch 6/10

he talkin all this shit saying he goin to rip me... well lets just see
im not even trying cause i know ur a herb... so dont even test me
->>filler 4/10

man im done battle herbs nobody will ever see shit like this again..
u just another fag white boy like eminem ur idol and ur also from michigan
->>second line is stretched like crazy and doesnt really make sense if hes not white
->>4/10

haha a little white boy listenin to rap just trying to learn some ebonics
and next time u wanna battle young'en make sure u get "hooked on phonics"
->>weak closer 3/10

genicide 23/50

ive seen genicide come harder in our battle...never really seen much of mishaps stuff so i have nothing to compare to.

genicide is the only one with punches none of mishaps connected at all in my opinion. dont wanna get too long with it though so:
v-genicide
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