umm dis shit was wun sided....first let me say somthin 2 nigaz rap period "rappin" is makin ya words "ryhme" if ya shit dont ryhme then u might as well just talk ova a beat...and x dat was u basically did ya shit was not ryhmin 4 nothin so u basically lost rite there..let me break it down tho
opener-eye...x said and sacred dont ryhme lol
structure-eye...x ya lines was 2 fukkin long
punchlines-eye
multis-eye
creativty-eye
personals-nun
finisher-a tie
enjoyed-eye.....ofcourse dude just came harder his ryhmed and it was neat so datz good enuff da win dis shit x step ya game up dunn
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