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I’m yo father figya nigga, sit down and let me teach u a lesson
Yo daddy is the devil son so I hoped u prayed 2 god fo a blessin

Na...no punch..spelling mistakes to 2/10

I can walk through a valley a flames wit out one burn stain (I’m dat hot)
This battle is ova and all u got to show is yo dirty draws covered in shit stains

Played as Fuck..structure fell off to!..2/10

The rhymes I spit’ll leave you very dirty down south
Back talk yo pops and I’ll remove the teeth from yo mouth

Not again..god im getting shit bored already..weak 2/10

Why u think I roll wit underground? Cuz I muffle niggas sounds
Push em in the ground so hard that the end result is earth mounds

Nooo! another weak par with no punch at all..2/10

U call yoself black pantha, but yo true color is pink
I’ll rip yo skin off, make a coat, and wear it like it was mink

Nope wack again (shakes head) ..2/10

Now on the block they call ya old man Mr. Sunkist (why?)
Cuz I throw flames at these niggas and leave they bodies Sunkissed

Same fucking word..wack god im getting bored snor 2/10

The heat I produce’ll make u darker then Green Mile
I’ll grind yo bones n organs into sumtin more disgustin than fish bile

meh..this sucked also fuck sake..elevate 2/10

And you can tell yo crew who done it to ya, man I don’t care
I’ll stomp them hoes into dust, put em in my hand, and blow em in the air

Best bar so far but still not good enuff in my eyes..3.5/10

Now this is my closer chump, I’m done wit you kid
Merked u in 18 bars and left u bandaged and limpin from the damage I did

Na..weak closer..to round off a poor verse.chea..2/10

What can i say but this was a very weak verse..punches were played when there were any!!..structure fell off quite a bit..so did the flow..vocab was also basic.peep vets drops and learn from them elevate!!!..

Lets hope the next one is better

Put the dick back in yo mouth cause ur verse was wack and we all know that
The only time yo could spit bitch is on ur boyfriends nutsack

Played (sighs)..but at least it was a punch..2.5/10

If you think I cant spit put me to da test
Bitch Ill deliver you up faster than the daily express

Naaa..not good enuff was to basic 2/10

Yo, I listen to all types of music so what if Im old fashion
My passion is for smashin this faggot bitch whos up fo rappin

Chea..wack no creavity at all 2/10

The only time this nigga go to the movies is fo gay porn flicks
In da mean time this faggot "Metah_Tates" about hard dicks

Attempt of wordplay..but the bar wasnt up to much at all..again with the played references 2.5/10

Nigga steppin to this usin dem same words soundin like a tape recorder
Faggot, you know u gon get served faster than a McDonalds drive through order

say what??? lol..not feeling tha either was pretty weak 2/10

Nigga u might as well call me Shaq cause im gon slam this one down
Shush bitch Im yo master I dont wanna hear a sound

laughs..not good..weak 2/10

U probably conviced my verse is over, naa B my record is still spinnin
Ur shitty raps r straight up brain dead and I dont need a second opinion

WOW!!! another weak bar..elevate fuck im bored 2/10

Well..was also weak in my opnion but..structure was better than your opponent..so was the flow..but your punches were on the same par as him..they were weak..u both need to elevate..

I cant vote on this on punches or personals..coz they were both terrible!!..so i will go for whoever had the best flow and structure..just

v/ black pantha..