these sound like dickrides cause durmil had a weak verse.first u had strucutre but that dont mean shit ur punches were very weak opener and closer was weak u should never explain ur punches anythign u cant do on stage dont do here cause itll wind up lookin bad only thing u had goin was structure i seen ur verses and usually u bring better than this. gods son not bad no strucutre but like i said before it dont mean nuthin aight started off extremely weak then it piked up from ur as gifted as a jew on christmas that made me laugh i like that then i duno wat u did another verse or somethin but that opener was weak and again the next line was weak but u piked up after that good closer wasnt bad some of ur lines r played out...BUT u did have harder and funnier punches than durmil so u get my vote pc

v/gods son