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New to RB
From: Somewhere over the rainbow... |
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IP:
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its your story additional ornaments arent needed
nothing left to do with my inner anger other than feed it
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That was my favorite line out of the whole peice...mostly becauase its really deep and I can relate.
Each of your stanzas had the AA BB type of rhyme scheme and I believe it worked out nicely for it...keep on posting! |