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Old 07-16-04, 01:13 PM   #12
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Durmil:i liked that soil line lmao.. was kinda funny.. id give it a 7.3/10



VIRT:hmm.. first line was coo.. but that virginity line is pretty played, and i wasent feeling the words you chose to to rhyme.. Imaginary and Virginity arent my favs.. If you would have rhymed it better, then it wouldnt have mattter if it was played lol, cause it owulda sounded tight.. Vascinity, hinder me, and Virginity woulda been dope rhyming words to use in this punch.. just some feedback.. 6/10 for potential

Good job to both...

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