the other site you posted is pretty coo.. has at lease some skill:

yo yur flows changed dramatic this time around yu post tighter //
but do votes go to you or should we boast your ghost writer? //
next time yu acquire some new words and learn a couple of weed terms //
dont burn 'G-13-' cuz you spit like seeds out of green fern //
who am i to kill a guy who tries to fight using insults with indo //
you stupid even during suicide like you tried to do it right out of yur basement window//
please stop pretending that yur insults are threatening //
my punchlines are recommended more than most expensive medicines //
when it comes to hip hop you need to make a quick stop and get beat with flip flops //
cuz you caught on 'still shots' like a kid stealin shit from thrift shops //
written or expressed the same shit stays said //
cuz even in text i can still draw stick dead O>-<
^thats a verse form the site we gonna battle on that metaphysik posted.. guys name was sticksomething or something stick.. it had stick in it i know that much -_-

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