vote/ready
ready had better structure,vocab,i think your punches were about the same though,need ta get some good wordplay happenin in those verses,young i think your verse was lacking in content,but it was a good battle for noob's..good job...

please return the favour:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418