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^ War Sergeant ^
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IP:
Aight...here's how I see it
For$akeN
shit kid you acting like the shit but I ain't see nothing yet~
you couldn't smoke my ass not even if you lighted a cigarette~
(pretty played weak punch try to word it better)
I'm surprised you claimed a title on another stupid ass site~
it couldn't be a hot spot if it was completely in the light~
(didn't hit very hard)
you just recently joined and you going up against a damn pro~
hmm. boi your rhymes are still flat you remind of a plateau~
(Ok)
you say you killing emcee's and at the same time doing beats~
your tracks couldn't imitate me... if the shit was on repeat!~
(not bad...again try wordin' it different)
r so lucky i'm going easy on you because your unknown~
you rhymes still couldn't beat me if it was twice postponed~(post twice...)
(Ok closer) Average verse
bklynafc2004
I'm not goin' to break down your verse because it was...well it was weak. I don't know what site you come from...but here 99.9% of the time you only get 1 verse to shine and you pretty much stayed in the shadow. You need to elevate in everything. Keep trying.
Vote For$aken
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