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Old 07-16-04, 04:17 PM   #12
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Thugzy - your punches were kinda played and your vocab was low. elevate some on the vocab and make your punches hit harder. Try to cut out those filter lines

Meta - pretty good verse. your punches hit harder than his and your personnals were better. better vocab than Thugzy and I think u had the overall better verse. Good battle

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