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^ War Sergeant ^
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IP:
Aight...I'mma vote i know how u feel.....
Will
manage to kill and killah, on sum real thug shit//
Imma savage u quick and let sum real blood drip//
(ok line)
I'm drunk as fuck and kno u can't see me//
u from NC, where my peeps lay, real family//
(kinda week)
uncannied, altopsy in ya bra and panties//
u feel ya self, I move crowds like stampedes
(not really feelin' that one)
u came in handy, I was in need for a easy win//
leave u laid out in my front yard like dirty recylcin bins//
(not bad)
can't contend, I have a fetish to see bodies twitch//
put a hole below ya abdomen so now u really a bitch
(good)
seen u flinch, coward thinkin wat Imma do now//
see me as James Brown tellin u to get on down//
(kinda weak)
ur unwound, wide open, ur prevail was a fluke//
it not the remi or the heni, ya presence made me puke//
(was ok)
overall not a bad verse pretty average
Killah
This bitch nigga real rough right
what I gotta do to make him see the light
(weak)
First of all nigga -I got clips for days
I dont see dead people -till they trip this way
(not bad could have used it better)
you aint trippin though yea ya peeps know why
Ill leave'm dead on the streets wit a bullet to they eye
(OK)
And my streets know why - you aint ready for some gun play
Buy a plane ticket but just make it a oneway
(kinda weak)
I dont have to explain my ill intentions
Just know that if you come, prepare to get missin
(kinda weak again)
All I got to say this this cat Nova
I got that Ether so you smoked like Hova
(not bad kinda short)
Overall I think Will had the better verse...his punches hit harder and flow was better
Vote Will
Return the favor...drop a honest vote
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