Aight, I think you both probably could have came harder.. especially you, For..

This battle was a waste of time in my opinion, where'd you pick this cat up from? Anyhow.. I know how ya feel.. here's my breakdown..
Flow - Forsaken: Easily.. read the verses and you'll understand.. For's flows nice for the most part, while bklyn's flow is choppy in quite a few places..
Punches - Forsaken: I'm not sure if bklyn even realizes the 'power of a punchline' .. For, you had a couple decent punches, but the rest were hittin' pretty soft.. nothin trashy, just couldv'e made em hit harder.. bk, I see a few attempts at punches, but I don't see any of em landing.. work on that..
Personals - Forsaken: You had a couple decent personals in there.. nothin' special, just letting us know you did your homework.. bky.. umm.. your only personal was admitting that For was tight.. what the hell was that?? Did you forget you were battling, not kissing ass?
Multis - Neither: wasn't impressed by this categy from either side.
Complexity - Forsaken: For's actually had some rhyme structure, and decent vocab.. bkl, I understand that you're new here, but you're gonna need to figure out what aspects people like to see here.. double verses and sloppy mechanics will get you nowhere.. good luck son..
v/Forsaken
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