Flow - insane: Neither of you impressed me much in the flow category.. Deadly, your lines/bars were too short, and didn't match up which resulted in choppiness.. insane, your structure was a bit better, and flow was a bit closer to where it should have been, but still quite choppy in certain areas..

Punches - insane: No offense, but somebody teach Deadly how to throw a punch before I do.. I don't think a single bar in your entire verse actually "hit" how it was supposed too.. Insane, not too shabby.. a few of them could have definately been fixed up, but at least you threw some..

Personals - insane: Deadly had none. insane, yours were weak and played, but at least you had one or two.. you played on his crew name, and you played on where he's from.. good enough to take this category I guess..

Multis - haha..

Complexity - insane: As I stated above, deadly, your verse was just too "lost" .. check out my vote layout, and what I've stated and see if you can improve a bit on those aspects.. insane, you've got potential.. keep workin' at it n' practicing the basic.. you'll be hittin heavy in no time..

much respect to the both of you.. keep it up..

VOTE - Insane


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