Aight Mc.Cm yo content wasnt that bad, but your structure was fucked up and most of your punches were weak, try not to stretch your lines so much, you started talkin like 50 cent near the end with all the gun shit, keep it realistic dawg we on the net, try and elevate

Revoke, structure was better, opener was pretty good, stayed consistent throughout the whole verse, had some decent punches, no personals but neitha one of yall had that. Better flow too, came out soundin better, so my vote goes to Revoke

vote=Revoike

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