flash-your verse was pretty decent. Your flow and structure was a lil shaky though with some stretched lines. But i do think you had betta wordplay. YOu had alot of punches that really affected the opponent. You had some crucial personals as well. Expand and elevate on vocabulary and multis though.

PP-your verse was decent as well. I do think that your flow and structure was betta, but still it was a lil shaky. Punches were pretty good, but i think you should have had more personals in your verse. Ya wordplay wasnt that good either, elevate on your vocabulary and multis as well. Overall i think Flash had the betta verse because of more personals.

v/Flash