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Old 07-16-04, 09:17 PM   #5
fluidmoon
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shit alright,
Foresaken:you took this shit heres why: your verse was a verse not a fucking neverending story, you had good punches, flow, and structure, u didnt come that hard, but in this case i dont know if u had too....overall good opener and closer, but not ur best...
bklyn:yo, not hatin or anything, but ur verse would have been better if u kept it together, literally,your verse was decent but not good enough to beat foresaken
VOTE:foresaken
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