Last Request#1

They call me last request im one of the best/
my rymes hit u hard like a train hit yo chest/
->>not terrible 3/10

so dont complaine when i put ur game to shame/
->>i see the internal rhyme but you need a line that rhymes this 2/10

i dont wanna hear u cry when they vote for me/
guys just tell him the truth and let it be/
->>filler but decent 3/10

cause once u chose to spit vs me u lose/
im like a 5th of vodka with out booze/
->>weak 2/10

im sick and fast/
and when u spit against me u come in last/
->>first line is way too short 3/10

so quit give up cause when it comes to rymeing ill just light up/
->>no rhymes in this whatsoever 1/10

like a fuse with gasoline on the end i light quick and put ur rap game to an external end/
->>terrible 0/10

->>total 15/70 21.43%

DaReTuRn

Battling me is a mismatch, do u have any last requests
your on the podium now looking worse then johny quest
->>good first line not feelin the second one 5/10

hillsdale aint shit, just a bunch of country hicks
u dont get no chicks, thats why u just suck dicks
->>nobody from heres heard of hillsdale but good second line 5/10

yo im sorry about your dad, do u want to end up like him
6 feet under the ground in a casket with the silver trim
->>i wouldnt talk about someones dead dad in a battle but you did so i gotta rate it
->>4/10

at any time i can relize your pathetic, you aint poetic
i dont need nemore lines, my rhymes are tight respect it
->>pretty good closer 6/10

->>total 20/40 50.00%


DaReturn took it by a mile...no hate on the low scores I'm rating you compared to the whole board and you both need to elevate. Last Request you need some serious work on your structure and dont get creative with the rhyme scheme till you elevate some. Thats my piece on this battle.

v-DaReturn

hit up my battles in the sig.

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