Battle was pretty slow on Killlah's side, just didnt really come with punches. A lot of gun talk...you cant really use that online. Your guns dont matter here, put on your boxing gloves and throw some punches. It would be good for you to add in some multies and some tight metas, check out their avatar and come up with some personals...and some tight rhymes. Keep ya structure a lil bit tighter and ya flow will be on better....no beef, big ups just elevate.

WillNova a few good punches, flow was right on i noticed how you started a few lines with rhymes from the last bar...I do that myself in some rhymes, pretty tight. Not really any decent metas, or good multies, throw some of those in for a factor. Pretty good verse over all though.

V/Willnova

My Young Lewis battle needs some votes if you all dont mind...thanks.