WillNova

manage to kill and killah, on sum real thug shit//
Imma savage u quick and let sum real blood drip//
->>ok multi but punch was weak 4/10

I'm drunk as fuck and kno u can't see me//
u from NC, where my peeps lay, real family//
->>this doesnt rhyme at all 3/10

uncannied, altopsy in ya bra and panties//
u feel ya self, I move crowds like stampedes//
->>weak rhyming good punching 5/10

u came in handy, I was in need for a easy win//
leave u laid out in my front yard like dirty recylcin bins//
->>weak punch second line stretched 3/10

can't contend, I have a fetish to see bodies twitch//
put a hole below ya abdomen so now u really a bitch//
->>this was my favorite line 6/10

seen u flinch, coward thinkin wat Imma do now//
see me as James Brown tellin u to get on down//
->>doesnt make sense 3/10

ur unwound, wide open, ur prevail was a fluke//
it not the remi or the heni, ya presence made me puke//
->>good closer 6/10
->>total:30/70 42.86%

killah

This bitch nigga real rough right
what I gotta do to make him see the light
->>filler 4/10

First of all nigga -I got clips for days
I dont see dead people -till they trip this way
->>weak punch 4/10

you aint trippin though yea ya peeps know why
Ill leave'm dead on the streets wit a bullet to they eye
->>weak rhyme gun talk is annoying 3/10

And my streets know why - you aint ready for some gun play
Buy a plane ticket but just make it a oneway
->>good punch but gun talk is still annoying 5/10

I dont have to explain my ill intentions
Just know that if you come, prepare to get missin
->>kinda weak rhyme but ok punch 4/10

All I got to say this this cat Nova
I got that Ether so you smoked like Hova
->>decent closer 4/10
->>total:24/60 40.00%

Willnova really had this in the bag but killah had a good effort.

will: work on making sure that it rhymes good like say it out in your head a lot and just keep elevating
killah: just elevate your structure, get more length to your lines and get a LOT more creative...gun talk is played

the %'s look like im hatin but you gotta think a 100% is like winning the tournament so gettin a 40% is not really a bad thing especially when you are still elevating

v/willnova
\/hit these up honestly\/

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