WillNova

I'm checkin in, so lets begin//
battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins//
->>wasted a whole line checkin in? its ok 4/10

reach within, and give it ya heart and soul//
worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls//
->>pretty good 6/10

stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs//
ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs//
->>doesnt make sense 2/10

u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives//
I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges//
->>doesnt connect...3/10

its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble//
predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals//
->>kinda cool 5/10

with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled//
knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double//
->>alright closer 4/10

->>total: 24/60

the 8th wonder

Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin//
->>feeding and second line makes no sense 3/10

It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband//
And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands//
->>feeding but ok 5/10

Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage//
Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage//
->>feeding and second line is wayy stretched 4/10

Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle//
Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled//
->>feeding but ok punch 5/10

Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already//
You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony//
->>feeding + wack 2/10

Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave//
And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave//
->>feeding and second line doesnt make sense 4/10

->>total 23/60

this was a real close battle but WillNova took it.

youve gotta be more original than that 8th feeding is for herbs...and also making sense is more important than rhyming. no hate just advice.

will you gotta work on making sense too man that mole role line was real wack

v/willnova

\/hit these up honestly\/

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