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Old 07-17-04, 02:39 AM   #18
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STRYPE:THOUGHT YOUR VERSE WAS GOOD FLOWING N HAD ALOT OF ELEMENTS,PUNCHES,MULTI'S,SO ON IT WAS DEFFINATLY THE BETTER VERSE
HOT:NOT A BAD VERSE BUT I DON'T THINK YOUR FIRST 4 LINES WORKED IN YOUR FAVOUR,IT JUS DINT CATCH MY EYE,YOUR STRUCTURE WAS OFF ALSO,GOOD BATTLE OVERALL THOUGH

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PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...hp?t=135134..mc syx

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=134418...MARV