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^ War Sergeant ^
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IP:
This was pretty much a one sided battle. Trajed'ee i wasen't feelin' your flow your structure was off. need to elevate on ya vocab some and throw some harder punches' and personnals.
the metaphor wins this one with better flow and strucure. punches really didn't hit that hard but it was a better verse.
Return the favor...Need honest votes
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